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Band 4+: You recently had a job interview. Write a letter to the HR manager. - express your appreciation for his time and consederation; - mention the things you forgot to ay; - mention you reinterest

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Dear Mr Roger,

I am writing to you to express for say lots of thanks to spent your time for me and then I was very pleased with your responsible approach to ever candiat, which was took interview by yours.

As well as, I want to write some an essintial things to you when I escaped to say during interview session. Firstly, I am treating from time to time, because of I have a problm below to my eyes.Therefore, this desease was came out sitting in front of the computer. I hope you will premission to treated for me. Secondly, if you take me to work, I will come my costmures, where old office before I worked . Consequently,the benefit of your sales deparment will grow. Finally, my old working place has an extra three stars when I worked.

Furthermore, I am telling about my reintersts. A special uniforms, including office clouthes are uncomfortable for me. I hesitate all of them. In my mind, uniforms are not important role for sale facility. I will hope you shoul be not demand from me, that is say, I must to wear special wearings at work.

Thank you for your time and consideration once again.

Yours faithfully,

Zuhra Khudoyberdiyeva

Word Count: 206

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter partially addresses the task by expressing appreciation for the HR manager's time and mentioning the things forgotten to say. However, the expression of interest could be clearer and more focused. To improve, ensure all points are directly related to the job interview and express interest more explicitly.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is somewhat coherent, but there are issues with cohesion. Some ideas are not logically connected, and the flow of the letter could be improved for better readability. Work on organizing ideas more effectively and use transition words to connect sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or inappropriately. Work on improving the accuracy of word choice and use more sophisticated language where possible. Additionally, pay attention to spelling and grammar to enhance the overall lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While there is an attempt to use a variety of sentence structures, there are several grammatical errors throughout the letter. Focus on improving subject-verb agreement, verb tense consistency, and sentence structure for better accuracy. Proofreading for punctuation errors is also necessary.

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