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Band 5+: You recently joined a sports club but you have found that there are some problems there. Write a letter to the manager of the sports club. In your letter say why you joined the club explain the problems suggest what action the manager should take

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter with regards to voluntary a sports club position that you have recently advertised, and I look for individuals willing to fix some problems on club.

I saw the advertisement on a local newspaper that you hiring some volunteers who would like to participate. I was interested the position as I need to improve my teaching experience before applying work related to my previous study. Besides I have currently graduated from a University.

During my university years, I have one problems when students not interested what I am teaching sports. Such as, strong mens like a football but a nerd mens like doing badminton. Furthermore, I would like to improve my teaching ability to handle this problems.

While I have developed effectively entertaining sports method, which can help students learn faster. However, I suggest solutions to fix them with talk one by one what students interested so they can focus on they like.

Yours faithfully,

Aan Seftyan

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task, but it could be more focused on the problems and solutions. The letter could be more concise and clear in its purpose.

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5.5

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4.5

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