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Band 5+: You recently joined a sports club but you have found that there are some problems there. Write a letter to the manager of the sports club. In your letter say why you joined the club explain the problems suggest what action the manager should take

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform my experience about some problems I get 3 days ago in your sports club at the Olimpic Stadium.

I joined the club it is because I need outdoors activities to maintain my body and reduce level of strees, I believe when I join you club sports I could be better than before, especially sports club here provide many activities, such as running, gymnastic play basketball and volleyball.

I see some problems such as Nets volleyball get damage. In there crowded I cannot use the tools optimally because have many people using it, field basketball some people using to other activities such as gatering.

I suggest to limiting members could be give member comfortable and repairing damage at the sports club and prohibiting any beside activities in the Olimpic Stadium

I hope my suggestion can improve your sports club.

Yours Faitfully,

Riky pinandra

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