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Band 5+: You recently joined a sports club but you have found that there are some problems there. Write a letter to the manager of the sports club. In your letter say why you joined the club explain the problems suggest what action the manager should take

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Dear Mr. Jonathon,

This letter has been registered with the purpose of complaining about a problem that I joined your club.First of all, I have joined the club which is located near the city center in order to take a break three days ago. Apart from this, my dear friend told me regarding this club. As well as that I decided to go to this organization.

Secondly, this club has experienced coaches but furnitures which are located in the club are very old equipment. You know that special sports equipments are required for those who go to. Otherwise, it is bad affect for people’s life that is engaged in sport with that old equipments are harmful and difficult for health body of people.

Eventually, I would like sort to give you a few suggestions regarding this matter. Firstly, you should take a quality furnitures pot to your club. Otherwise, nobody will not come to your club in order to play sports.

Hoping a prompt action from you regarding this matter! I look forward to hearing you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Sarvinoz Shiknazarova.

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Overall Band Score

5
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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
regarding: 3
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Task Response

5.5
The letter adequately addresses the task, but the explanation of why the writer joined the club is not very clear. The suggestions are also not very specific.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5
The letter is difficult to follow due to numerous grammatical errors. The organization of ideas is not always clear.

Lexical Resource

5
The letter uses a range of vocabulary, but there are some errors in word choice and collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4
The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, which significantly affect the clarity and fluency of the writing.

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