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Band 6+: You recently learned that a close friend of yours has had a baby, and you purchased a gift for the baby. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: Congratulate them on the arrival of the baby Describe the gift you have chosen for the baby Suggest arrangements for your visit to deliver the gift.

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Dear Prabh,

I hope you this letter finds you well. Firstly, congratulations to you and whole family for this precious baby boy. I believe becoming parents is such a great blessing to people. I clearly remember that you and Karan was waiting for this moment from someone long.

After receiving your letter, I started thinking about gift for baby. A couple of days ago, I went to a gift shop. After spending so many hours there are found a perfect gift, a car. I am sure my loving nephew will love this gift.

However, I am coming to your home this month. I bought my ticket yesterday and I will arrive very soon. It would be great if you can send someone to pick me from airport. I want to stay with you so please buy all needed things for me. I am excited to see cute baby.

Yours loving,

Shandeep

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, expanding on the gift description and visit arrangements would improve the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly clear. Improving the flow and logical sequencing of ideas would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate but could be more varied and precise for a higher score. More sophisticated word choices would strengthen the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

While the letter conveys its message, grammatical errors and inaccuracies detract from the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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