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Band 5+: You recently moved to a new apartment, but you are not satisfied with several things in the building. Write a letter to the building manager. In your letter: • explain when you moved in • describe the problems you are facing • say what you want the manager to do

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to request your assistance regarding several issues with a new accommodation that I recently moved into.

I would like to ask whether it is possible for you.Firstly, I desire to watch films at a television, as I have a free time out working but there is currently lack of the bigger display television.Secondly, I work full-time, especially I live alone. Therefore, I often buy a frozen meal from the market and I am prepared this the meal by a microwave.However, My new rented apartment does not exist one.

In addition,I would appreciate it if you could provide further items such as a freezer, a chair and a work table me for daily use.

I hope this request will not cause you any inconvenience, and I look forward to receiving your response at your earliest convenience.

Yours faithfully,

Olivier.

Word Count: 145

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:
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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by explaining the reason for writing, describing the problems, and requesting action. However, the clarity and specificity of the problems could be improved. For example, instead of just saying 'lack of the bigger display television,' specify the size or type of television desired. Also, the letter could benefit from more natural and fluent language. To improve, focus on providing more detailed descriptions of the issues and using more precise vocabulary. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider dedicating a separate paragraph to each problem in the apartment to enhance clarity. Transition words could also be used more effectively to connect ideas within paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. For example, instead of 'lack of the bigger display television,' you could say 'the apartment is not equipped with a television.' Try to use synonyms and more descriptive words to enhance the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For instance, the sentence 'I would like to ask whether it is possible for you' is awkward. It's better to directly state your request. Also, check for subject-verb agreement and correct article usage (a/an/the) throughout the letter. Proofreading carefully will help improve accuracy.

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