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Band 4+: You recently moved to a new apartment, but you are not satisfied with several things in the building. Write a letter to the building manager. In your letter: • explain when you moved in • describe the problems you are facing • say what you want the manager to do

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Hi sir,

hope you are doing well. I write this letter to inform you i recently moved in your appratment at Transcona and i am not satisfied with it due to some reasons.

I recently moved in your appartment because your appartment location near to my college. But, i am not happy to move here because your appartment cooling system is not working properly. May it is too much old. It is unable to cool the my suite as i required. As you know there are summer day. Without AC is really hard to live. Actually, i am doing work from home. So that’s why i have to stay at the home most of time. I really feel hot whenever i doing my work. Therefore, i am not able to attention on my work. Can you send any teachnian to upgrade it.

I look forward listen from you as soon

Your faithfully

Jashandeep Singh

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

doing: 3

appartment: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by explaining the writer's dissatisfaction, describing the problem with the cooling system, and suggesting a solution. The content is relevant and logically organized. To improve, ensure consistent accuracy in grammar and word choice throughout the letter. For example, 'technician' is misspelled, and phrases like 'listen from you' could be improved to 'hearing from you'.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more cohesive devices to link sentences and paragraphs for better readability. For example, using transition words like 'Furthermore' or 'In addition' can help connect related ideas. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main point to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks variety. To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of synonyms and more specific vocabulary related to the issues you're describing. For instance, instead of just saying 'not happy,' you could use phrases like 'dissatisfied' or 'displeased.' Also, avoid informal language like 'too much old'; opt for more formal alternatives. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and article usage (a/an/the). For example, 'i recently moved in your appartment' should be 'I recently moved into your apartment.' Also, work on sentence structure to avoid run-on sentences and fragments. Proofreading carefully before submitting can help catch these errors.

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