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Band 5+: You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter

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Dear Sir,

I was orderd in your company,I was purchased online a Tv in your company its the worth is 1000 dollar and today order is delivered in my home,when i was opened a courier and i may shocked because a TV remote is not available in my courier this is your company mistake.

Remote is the main key of a TV and without remote TV look like a Simple video hole.My mother she is older and dont stand to change a channel for every one minute.This is a big mistake for your company in our family member watch a TV for every morning and evening So Remote is very needful equipment in our home.

please replace a TV remote in a two to three days,i know this company is a very helpful for every customer to provide a information,delivernce and please send me a my remote quikly,Thankls

Your sincerely,

XYZ

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