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Band 5+: You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter

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Dear Sir,

I orderd from your company,I purchased a TV online from your company.it is the worth $1000, and today the order was delivered to my home.When I opened the courier,I was shocked because the TV remote was not in the courier. This is your company’s mistake.

The remote is the main key to a TV, and without it,the TV is like a Simple video hole.My mother is elderly and cannot stand to change the channel every one minute.This is a big mistake for your company. Our family member watch TV for every morning and evening,So the Remote is very needful equipment in our home.

please replace the TV remote within two to three days,I know this company is very helpful in providing information, and delivery to every customer ,and please send me my remote quickly,Thanks

Your sincerely,

XYZ

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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every: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. Minor improvements in organization and clarity would enhance the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

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