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Band 5+: You recently read an advertisement about a volunteer program abroad that interests you. Write a letter to the program coordinator. - Introduce yourself and your background. - Explain why you are interested in this particular volunteer program. - Ask specific questions about the program details and application process.

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Dear sir,

I am Prabhjot kaur live in india and the reason I am writing letter to you that I recently read about your NGO by an ad showed up on my screen while I was searching for something on Google. In that ad you want volunteers for your NGO and I found it worthwhile for me .as I also want to become help people by expecting nothing in return.And want to apply for this job.

As I have knowledge about this program as my friend doing this same thing like to take care elders ,handicapped peaple who lost hope to live a life .you encouraged them to live happy life by taking good care of them.

It is my teenage dream to take care of people who just do not like their life as well as have not a family or partner to bide a life with.

If I have to talk about skill I am very calm and patient .and this type of job needs this the most and also a good communicator with whom they can vent freely without any hesitation.Although I am very energetic one.

I hope you respond me as soon as possible to give further information that useful for to applying job.

Your faithfully,

Prabhjot kaur.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Task Response

The letter addresses the requirements of the task, discussing what the writer knows about the program, explaining their interest, and describing relevant skills. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that could be improved. For example, the introduction could be more concise and direct. Also, the conclusion could be more professional.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization could be improved for better flow. Consider dedicating separate paragraphs to each of the task's requirements: discussing what you know about the program, explaining your interest, and describing your skills. Using more cohesive devices (e.g., transition words, pronouns) would also enhance the connection between ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat basic. Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas more precisely. For example, instead of 'help people,' you could use 'assist individuals' or 'support communities.' Also, be mindful of word choice to ensure it aligns with the formal tone expected in a letter to an organization. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of articles and prepositions. For instance, 'I am Prabhjot kaur live in india' should be 'I am Prabhjot Kaur and I live in India.' Proofreading carefully before submitting can help catch these errors.

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