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Band 4+: You recently stayed with your friend to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you must: Describe what happened. Explain when it happened. Suggest how the damage can be repaired.

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Hi Mili! How are you? How is your vacation going? I hope it is everything right.

I am writing to you because yesterday, I went to your flat to check it and I had a little accident.

I entered in the flat and then I opened the window to breathe. First, let me tell you, yesterday was a windy day. Suddenly, the windows battered with the wall and broke down the glass. In this moment I tried call for help but it was Saturday afternoon so nobody was working. I can preventively fix, I closing the damage with paper and tape. However, don’t worry, Monday I will get anyone to put a new glass.

This is the only problem, other things are going well. You continued enjoying the trip and don’t forget to send me photos, please! When you return to Cordoba, let’s have dinner together and we talk everything.

Love you so much, friend.

Bye, kisses!!

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4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter partially addresses the task by describing what happened and suggesting how the damage can be repaired. However, the explanation of when it happened is vague and lacks specific details. It would be better to provide a clear timeline of events.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is somewhat coherent, but there are some issues with cohesion. The flow of ideas could be improved by organizing the information more logically. Additionally, there are some abrupt transitions between sentences that disrupt the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

There is a moderate range of vocabulary used, but some words and phrases are not used accurately or appropriately. Work on expanding your vocabulary and using more precise language to enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While there is an attempt to use a variety of grammatical structures, there are several errors in punctuation, verb tense, and sentence structure. Proofreading and editing for grammar would be beneficial to improve accuracy.

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Band 4+: You recently stayed with your friend to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you must: Describe what happened. Explain when it happened. Suggest how the damage can be repaired.

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