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Band 4+: You recently went on a sightseeing tour which you did not enjoy. Write a letter to the manager of the tour company. In your letter: explain why you chose that particular tour explain what you did not like about the tour suggest two ways in which the tour could be improved

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Dear manager,

Recently, i went on sightseeing tour, but i didn’t enjoy it. I mean, the problem was not about the place that we invited, but it was more about the stuff like some rundown activities that the tour made for us.

Going forward i suggested to the guide to organized events in a more structured way. Througout in there, all of us did our own activites, some people went to take picture, trying traditional clothes and many more so we were separated away. It wasted our time, and i thought it was not effective.

I give you this letter with the honor, please give this your attention and take the necessary action, thank you.

Jakarta, 10 june 2025

Best regards,

Vilma

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