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Band 4+: You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level.

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I am write this letter to inform about brochure walking tour in the mountains, but I am not fit. I worry not able to keep up.

To begin with, I am like to hiking and also love about landscape montain with forest, wich is i saw your brochure that make me verry interesting about it. in Addition walking in the forest able realize my stress of work hard and daily busy.

Moreover, In brochure not available about information date and rate, Wich is I need to know date and rate until l able to adjust my schedule. I hope you can get information about it.

Therefore, I have concern about fitnes level. Yesterday I am work hard until I forget to eat and also reduce rest. Then make me not fit. I worry not able to keep up. I hope you understand my condition.

Tlook forward to your reaply

Kind regards,

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses the task, but it could be more concise and organized.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter lacks a clear structure and flow. The ideas are not always connected logically, and the grammar errors make it difficult to follow the message.

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The letter uses a range of vocabulary, but there are some errors in word choice and collocations.

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