Process Diagram

Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image outlines a process, starting with planting bamboo plants in spring and followed by harvesting in autumn, then cutting into strips. Next, the fibers are softened by adding water and chemicals, followed by filtering to separate long fibers from liquid, then crushing to produce liquid pulp. Finally, the spun material makes yarn, and weaving completes to manufacture fabric for garments.

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The given diagram illustrates the manufacturing process of the fabric formed from bamboo.

From an overall perspective, it is conspicuous that the process of making fabric from bamboo is lengthy and passes from different stages.It is not particularly labour-intensive, requiring minimal manual intervention and some basic technical equipment required.

To being with, In the first step the bamboo plant is grow in spring season and then harvested the plant in autumn.Then these plants are cutting into strips.In the next stage these strips crushed to make liquid pulp.Then filter the pulp and during filtration separate long fibers fom the strip.After that added some water and amino oxide to soften the fibers.

In the next stage the material is spun into yarn, after which it is woven to produce fabric.Finally, the fabric is turned into garments, such as socks and T-shirts.

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

The report covers the requirements of the task, outlining the main stages of the bamboo fabric manufacturing process. There is a generally clear progression through the stages, and the summary identifies key steps. To improve, focus on enhancing the structure and flow of the report. Consider grouping related stages together and using more precise language to describe the transformations occurring at each step. Also, ensure consistent and accurate use of grammar and vocabulary throughout the report. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a general overview and follows the process sequentially, but the organization could be improved. The second paragraph is a bit too general and could be integrated more effectively with the subsequent steps. Transitions between stages could be smoother to enhance the flow of information. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas and sentences.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally adequate for describing the process, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. Using more specific terms related to manufacturing processes and materials would enhance the report. For example, instead of 'cutting into strips,' you could use a more precise term if available. Also, try to incorporate a wider range of synonyms to avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage are present. Sentence structure is relatively simple, and there's limited use of complex sentence structures. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy and incorporating a wider range of sentence structures to enhance the overall quality of the report. Pay close attention to proofreading for common errors.

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