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Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs below show the age of visitors from the UK to Spain in 1983 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image presents two pie charts comparing the age distribution of UK visitors to Spain in 1983 and 2003. In 1983, the data indicates: 0-15 years at 16%, 16-24 years at 10%, 25-34 years at 4%, 35-54 years at 20%, and 55+ years at 50%. Meanwhile, in 2003, it shows: 0-15 years at 25%, 16-24 years at 12%, 25-34 years at 12%, 35-54 years at 15%, and 55+ years at 36%.

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These graphs illustrates that numbers of different age group people visit from the UK to Spain in 1983 and 2003.

In the first pie chart which is 1983 shows the people who are 0 to 15 years old are 20% while in 2003 the ratio of this age group decreased by 12%. Moving to the next age group which 16 to 24 years old had very low amount of portion in 1983 which is 4% and 15% increased in 2003.

Furthermore, the individuals who are 25 to 34 years old didn’t have much difference in amount of their ratios which is 10% in 1983 and 12% in 2003. The next age group lies between 35 to 54 years old and these age group people have great amount of percentage of visiting from UK to Spain and the ratios is 16% in 1983 and dramatically increased in 2003 which is 26%.

Lastly, The last age group is 55+ Years old inhabitats. These age group inhabitants visit very often to Spain and always had the greater amount ratios in both pie charts. The percentage of this age group is 50% in 1983 and faced sudden decrased in 2003 by the ratio of 35%.

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years: 5

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people: 3

spain: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the data for both years across all age groups. However, there are significant issues with data accuracy and clarity. Many of the figures reported in the text do not match the provided visual description (for example, the 0-15 age group and the 16-24 age group), which makes the comparison confusing. Additionally, the mathematical descriptions of changes (e.g., 'decreased by 12%' or 'increased by 15%') are often used incorrectly to describe the difference between two percentages. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the specific percentages shown in the charts and use clearer comparative language such as 'increased from X% to Y%' rather than calculating the difference between the two values unless specifically asked. Ensure that the overview clearly summarizes the main trends, such as the shift from an older demographic to a more balanced age distribution.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a basic structure, but the progression of ideas is hindered by awkward phrasing and repetitive sentence structures. While you attempt to use transition signals like 'Furthermore' and 'Lastly', the internal logic of the sentences is often difficult to follow. To improve, focus on using cohesive devices more naturally to link data points rather than just listing them. Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that the relationship between the two years is clearly established through comparative language.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is quite limited and often used incorrectly, which obscures meaning. For example, terms like 'inhabitants' are inappropriate in this context, as the charts refer to visitors, not permanent residents. There is also frequent misuse of words like 'amount' and 'portion' when referring to percentages. To improve, study academic collocations for describing trends (e.g., 'accounted for', 'represented', 'constituted') and ensure you use precise terminology when discussing proportions and percentages. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are significant grammatical errors throughout the report, including subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'graphs illustrates'), incorrect sentence construction, and issues with tense. Many sentences are fragmented or contain errors that make the reader struggle to understand the intended meaning. You should focus on mastering basic sentence structures, particularly how to use relative clauses (e.g., 'the group which...') and how to correctly structure comparative sentences. Practice using a variety of complex structures to describe changes over time.

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