Pie Chart

Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the percentage of visitors from the USA to Canada in different age groups in 2000 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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Image for topic: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the percentage of visitors from the USA to Canada in different age groups in 2000 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image displays two pie charts on the age of visitors from the USA to Canada in 2000 and 2020. In 2000, the percentages for the age groups were: 0-15 years (10%), 16-24 years (4%), 25-34 years (20%), 35-54 years (50%), and 55+ years (16%). In 2020, the figures were: 0-15 years (12%), 16-24 years (15%), 25-34 years (12%), 35-54 years (35%), and 55+ years (26%).

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The bar chart illustrates the proportions of kids in European country who attended four different types in activities in 2009.

Overall, it show that children who watched TV have the biggest rates than all of the activities. While playing video games have the lowest rates among of other activities.

Children who is 5-8 years old had the biggest percentage in watching TV with almost 100 percent. While other age groups, which are 9-11 years olds and 12-15 years olds had the same rates with almost 80 percent. The reading comics activity’s highest rates were the same with 9-11 years olds and 12-15 years olds with around 60 percent and lowest rate were 5-8 years olds with less than 60 percent.

Kids who played video games had the biggest rate in 5-8 years olds with higher than 50 percent, after 9-11 years olds had lower rate then that. While, 12-15 years olds had the lowest percentage in playing video games category with approximately 50 percent. Riding bike had the biggest rate among 12-15 years olds with around 75 percentages. While, 5-8 years olds were the second and 9-11 years are the lowest

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

years: 12

percent: 5

biggest: 4

rates: 4

while: 4

lowest: 4

12-15: 4

video: 3

games: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend is mentioned, but the data presented does not match the visual description (which is about age of visitors from the USA to Canada, not children's activities). The report describes a bar chart about children's activities, which is not the given visual. This indicates a fundamental misunderstanding of the task. Additionally, the report lacks clear comparisons and has grammatical errors that affect clarity. To improve, ensure the report accurately reflects the visual information, select key features, and make relevant comparisons. Also, proofread for grammatical accuracy and use precise data.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, an overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by frequent grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes incorrect (e.g., 'While' used repeatedly and inappropriately). Paragraphing is present but not always skilfully managed, as ideas within paragraphs could be more clearly linked. To improve, focus on using a wider range of linking words and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic with smooth transitions between sentences.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but lacks range and precision. There are several instances of informal or inaccurate word choices (e.g., 'kids' instead of 'children', 'rates' instead of 'percentages' or 'proportions', 'attended four different types in activities' which is awkward). The report would benefit from using more formal and varied vocabulary, such as 'proportions', 'age groups', 'accounted for', and 'exhibited'. Additionally, avoid repetition of 'biggest' and 'lowest' by using synonyms like 'highest', 'most significant', 'smallest', and 'least common'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that impede clarity and accuracy. There are subject-verb agreement issues (e.g., 'it show', 'children who is'), incorrect use of articles and prepositions (e.g., 'in European country', 'among of other activities'), and awkward phrasing throughout. The range of sentence structures is limited, with many simple and repetitive patterns. To improve, practice using a variety of complex structures, such as relative clauses and comparative forms, and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct preposition usage. Proofreading for punctuation and grammar is essential.

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