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Band 6+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice

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Hi Carla,

How are you doing?I am writing to you because I am really concern about your experience in your new school.I know that at the beginning it would be difficult to make new friends, but you are very sociable so you only need to trust you.

If I were you I would probably try to go out with the people that have some similarities with you. For example, did you try to organize a football match?. We used to play it together and it was very fun.Anyway, I hope that you enjoy your time in Australia. Don t forget that it will be an experience that you will have in your memories for the rest of your life. If you feel that you are not a good fit with your classmates try to join leisure activities where you can meet some different people and also from different cultures.Whatever you need, I am here to support you.Hope to hear about you soon.Best regards.Mica

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The advice given is relevant and helpful, although it could be more detailed and varied.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally easy to follow, but there are some minor issues with flow and paragraphing that could be improved for better clarity and cohesion. Some grammatical errors affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, but a wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's sophistication and impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

While the letter conveys the message, there are several grammatical errors that affect the overall accuracy and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy will significantly enhance the overall quality.

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