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Band 5+: You want to apply for a part-time job. Write a letter to the employer. In your letter: - Introduce yourself. - Explain why you are interested in the job. - Outline your relevant experience and skills.

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Dear sir/Madam

I am Ekjot kaur, writing this letter to express my interest in office admin part time job in your company. I have done diploma in mohawk college and 4 months internship. Also, have relevant experience of one year.

I am very much excited to work with you in your company as it was my dream to join you. I get to know about this position through indeed. Your company provide a employee health benefits, insurance. Further you also give flexible hours when needed. Your company has a great name in Canada.

I already did full time job in Toronto. The Clinic was very far from my home so I decided to leave. I have skills in data analysis, Microsoft, accounting and many more. I can also Schedule patients, make transcripts.

I hope you give me a positive reply and give me chance to deal with clients and grow more.

Yours sincerely

Ekjot Kaur

Word Count: 155

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, more detail and stronger justification in certain areas would improve the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, improved organization and flow would enhance clarity and readability. The numerous grammatical errors negatively impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate but lacks range and sophistication. More precise and varied language would strengthen the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

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Grammatical errors are frequent and detract from the overall quality. Improved accuracy and a wider range of grammatical structures are needed.

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