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Band 4+: You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give presentation at this conference. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, include: 1. Detail about conference. 2. Why you want your colleague to give presentation 3. What arrangements will you make for this arrangements.

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Dear Mr. Shaw,

I am writing this letter to throw some light on the presentation that I have been preparing since last month to demonstrate on next week in a conference. I do need your help presenting few topics which I find difficult.

First off, the sales department records have been misplaced by the sales team and in order to hold the conference, the record of our yearly sales is showing blank on our records. I am finding myself in a state of jeopardy and I know you are very lexical with the software and backups.

Therefore, I request you to please work on getting the sales record back and present the yearly performance in a conference which would be held in our company’s board room. I trust you more than anyone in this company and hope you can help your friend out.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours Sincerely,

Anmol Shakti Monga

Word Count: 156

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

sales: 4

conference: 3

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Task Response

The letter does not fully address the task. While it mentions a conference and requests help, it doesn't clearly convey all the necessary information, such as the conference's purpose, date, and specific details about the colleague's presentation.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization and flow could be improved. Some parts feel disjointed, and the connection between the request for help and the conference details is not entirely clear. Improving the structure and logical sequencing of ideas would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but could be more precise and sophisticated in places. A wider range of vocabulary would make the letter more impactful and professional.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency of the letter. Improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure is essential for a higher score.

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