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Band 5+: You want to rent out a small apartment to a family, and you have decided to advertise it. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper asking to advertise your ad on the front page of the newspaper. In your letter, 1. give details of the ad that you want to publish 2. mention that you want the ad to be published on the front page say 3. how you would like to pay for the advertisement Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing this letter to publish my ad in your newspaper called The Tribune. The ad is related to my rental unit. I would like to print about my small apartment. The apartment has two bedrooms, one is bigger than the other and it is more likely to master bedroom. The unit is fully renovated and, all the appliances are new. Please mention that the rent will be discussed over the phone and, the number is 9695200153.

I want the ad on the front page and I will share the pictures with you so, you can print those on the newspaper. The font size should be 14 and the main lines must be in bold text. Please try to write very straightforward wording.

I have one more question about the payment method for an advertisement. Please send me the details of it as well as, the invoice for the full amount.

Looking forward to hearing from you. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me at my number.

Best regards,

Simran

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

please: 4

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Task Response

5.5

The letter partially addresses the task by giving details of the ad to be published and mentioning the desire to have it on the front page. However, there are some lapses in content, such as not clearly stating the request to advertise the rental unit for a family and not providing specific details about the ad content.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The message is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with paragraphing and organization. The ideas are not consistently presented in a logical order, and there are some lapses in coherence and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is somewhat varied, but there are instances of imprecise and awkward language. The letter lacks a wide range of vocabulary and does not demonstrate full flexibility and control of lexical features.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

There is a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are noticeable grammatical errors and punctuation issues throughout the letter. More attention to grammatical accuracy is needed.

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