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Band 5+: You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter say who you are give details about the accident suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents

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DEAR SIR,

MY NAME IS HIMA PATEL, RESIDENT OF PARK AVENUE WHICH IS 10KM AWAY FROM YOUR SUPERMARKET. I AM WORKING AS A GENERAL MANAGER IN AN PRIVATE FIRM AND RECENTLY I HAD VISIT YOUR SUPERMARKET FOR PURCHASE OF SOME GROCERIES ALONG WITH MY WIFE AND 3 YEAR OLD SON.

AFTER OUR VISIT WHILE RETURNING BACK TO OUR HOME, DUE TO CONJUSTED PARKING IN OUTDOOR OF YOUR SUPERMARKET A VAN WHICH FULLY LOADED WITH ITEMS SUDDENLY GET COLLIDE WITH OUR CAR. THANKFULLY, NO ONE GET INJURED DURING THE ACCIDENT. THE MAIN REASON BEHIND THE ACCIDENT IS CARELESS DRIVING AND SMALL ALLOCATED SUPERMARKET PARKING.

FURTHER I HAVE HEARD FROM LOCALITIES THAT BEFOR FEW DAYS ALSO SOME INCIDENT OCCURED DUE TO PARKING ISSUES. I WOULD LIKE YOU TO MANAGE PROPER PARKING AREA ALONG WITH SOME PERSON WHO WILL ALWAYS LOOK OUT FOR VEHICLES TO BE PARKED PROPERLY IN ORDER TO AVOID ANY ACCIDENTS.

THANKING YOU

REGARDS

HIMA

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Overall Band Score

5
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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
supermarket: 4
parking: 3
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Task Response

6.5
The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the description of the accident could be more detailed and clearer. The suggestions for improvement are relevant but could be more specific.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and sentence structure. The numerous grammatical errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5
The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but a wider range and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's impact. Some lexical choices are slightly inaccurate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5
The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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