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Band 4+: You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter ● give details of the course ● say how the course would be useful ● explain how the company could help you do this course.

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To whom it may concern

I work for ABC Insurance. I have seen some information about the training course, and I believe it will be help me to sharpen my skill for my job. I am writing to enquire further information about this training course, I would be grateful if you could provide.

I am firmly and petulantly want to join this course but I have inadequate information about this, I need this course because, it is really help me to get new skill, hence, would you like to give me about the detail, perhaps like the timetable, and the cost. tThis course is 100% funded by my company, because they want their worker get better skill.

please call me if you can provide the the infomartions or have any questions.

kind regards,

kevin

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4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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course: 5

about: 4

information: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses the task, but lacks clarity and coherence. The writer provides some details about the course and its usefulness, but the explanation is not well-organized and lacks specific examples. To improve, focus on providing more specific details about the course and its benefits, and organize the letter in a clearer and more logical way. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter lacks cohesion and coherence. The writer jumps abruptly from one idea to another, and the paragraphs are not well-connected. To improve, focus on using transitional phrases and sentences to connect ideas, and organize the letter in a more logical and clear way.

Lexical Resource

The writer uses some basic vocabulary, but lacks precision and accuracy. There are some errors in word choice and usage. To improve, focus on using more precise and accurate vocabulary, and avoid using words that are not commonly used in formal writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The writer makes several grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement errors, tense inconsistencies, and incorrect use of prepositions. To improve, focus on using correct grammar and sentence structure, and proofread the letter carefully to eliminate errors.

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You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter ● give details of the course ● say how the course would be useful ● explain how the company could help you do this course.

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