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Band 5+: You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: -Explain why you want to work in the company’s head Office for six months -Say how your work could be done while you are away -ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear Mr. Potter,

I hope this letter finds you well.

I am writing to you to because i would like to work in the company’s head office for six month to get new experience. Also, i want to change the scenery a little , that’s why i hope that you can help me to organize it.

I decided to work in the company’s head Office because i want to grow in my career taking an example from the best workers. Furthermore it will help to improve my skills. I choose to spend six month because it is a perfect period to succeed to the maximum in learning the proposed material and also to take over the experience from the company’s bosses. While i’m away , i’ll plan tasks for the month and evey day, send work for review and always stay in touch with the main office.

Kindly reply and let me know if you can help organize it. If not, i will try to do it by my self.

Yours sincerely, Eseny.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

because: 3

company's: 3

month: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter partially addresses the task by explaining the desire to work in the company's head office for six months and asking for help in arranging it. However, the explanation could be more detailed and focused on how this experience will benefit the company as well. Additionally, the request for help could be more specific and professional.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The message is somewhat coherent, but there are some issues with cohesion and paragraphing. The ideas are not consistently organized, and the flow of the letter could be improved for better coherence. Consider using linking words and organizing the content into clear paragraphs for better cohesion.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is a range of vocabulary used, but some words are not used accurately, and there are instances of informal language. Aim for more precise and formal language to convey the message effectively. Additionally, expanding the vocabulary and using more sophisticated expressions would enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

While there is an attempt to use a range of structures, there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues throughout the letter. Work on improving the accuracy of grammar and punctuation to achieve a higher band score. Consider using complex structures with more accuracy and precision.

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