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Band 4+: you work for an international company. You have been seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. write a letter to your manager .in your letter describe the training course you want to do explain what the company could do to help you say how the course will be useful for your job

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Dear Manager,

I am writing this letter to request of training about english langugage that will take only four week. As you aware of our company is multinational and many of our colleges are not native english by tong. Due to fact that we must have good communications, i was considering to take english courses with two of my colleges in need for this courses. One of my college has significant problem about express any encounters at general meetings and this lessons will increase our efficiency of communication and will definitely increase our work performance.Also we have free budget is available for spending that kind of education.

Despite of heavy work load we still have free time at our weekends and me and my colleges are accepted to use our free time to spend it to this lessons, therefore our work performance will not effected by the courses. I strongly recommend you to consider this situation but our time interval is narrow. I am looking forward for your answer.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

english: 3

colleges: 3

courses: 3

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Task Response

The letter partially addresses the task by explaining the need for an English language training course and mentioning the company's support. However, more details could be provided on how the company could assist and how the course will specifically benefit the job.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with clarity and organization. The ideas could be better structured with more logical flow between sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some inaccuracies and awkward phrasing are present. Try to use more precise and varied vocabulary to enhance the overall quality of the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

There are several grammatical errors throughout the letter, such as 'colleges' instead of 'colleagues', 'by tong' instead of 'by tongue', and 'me and my colleges' should be 'my colleagues and I'. Work on improving sentence structures and grammar accuracy for a higher score.

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