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Band 4+: You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards the availability of electrical goods which I require for inauguration of my new house.

There are several mechanical items that needed to bring at our homely location. In order to fulfill basic requirements such as washing machine, mixer, lamps, stove, microwave and many more. Does your shop hold all these fragments or you need to place an order?

Apparently, in the local market all variety is present, but prices seems to be more expensive. However, I heard your retail store provides better discounts when purchasing a plethora of commodities.

After placing an order, for how long your outlet will be able to keep the items inside. What are the extra charges if applicable, and do you provide home delivery also or I need to come for pickup.

Looking forward from hearing from your part as soon as possible.

Your faithfully,

Mandeep Singh

Word Count: 154

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter successfully addresses all aspects of the task. It clearly states the request for information about the availability of goods, prices, and holding period.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter lacks a clear and logical flow. Some sentences are awkwardly phrased and the overall structure could be improved.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but some choices are not entirely appropriate or natural.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect the clarity and fluency of the message.

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Band 4+: You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

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