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Band 5+: You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Dear sir,

Im writing this letter to get information about seminar that would be held in another country.As i heard from my college about that and Im very interested in it to attend.the topic is very interesting and most of my favourite cardiac rehab.

Im looked this topic every where but did not get it.As i get know that college arranges this outside the pakistan I get very excited to attend.I get the chance to avail it and give me future job opportunity as well.

kindly give the details about dates at which dates it will happened so i will check my schedule.And also about program venue and time so i get to know.

what about accommodation?will u give us?or we will arrange by our own?

And most important about the cost detail.So i will check my bank account either it gives me permission or not.

i hope that you will reply me soon and clear all queries.

from,sarah.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by requesting information on dates, program, accommodation, and cost. However, the structure and clarity could be improved for better impact.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and organizational issues. Improving sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but a wider range and more precise word choices would improve the overall lexical resource score. Some words are used inaccurately.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Numerous grammatical errors affect the overall clarity and fluency of the letter. Significant improvement in grammar and punctuation is needed to achieve a higher score.

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