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Band 5+: Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask other questions about the trip

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Hellosir/madam My children

and others’ children go on 3-day trips to other cities with their classmates. I

am writing to the lead teacher and found out that he is identifying parents togo with the group and I want to go. My children and other children are going on a three-day trip to another country with their

classmates. The reason I’m going is because I don’t trust anyone with my

children, so I’m going with you. I can help during the trip. For example, the

children have a broken leg or arm, I can help with medicine, so I have experience working in a hospital. Again childrens or you headache and i found

available the medicine.During the trip, whether the children will be served food on the school side or should they take their own food and fruits, and which cities they will go to I hope youwill see what I wrote and answer some questions

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going: 3

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