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Band 5+: Your company has recently introduced a new work uniform. You are mostly happy with the uniform, but there is one thing that you do not like. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter * say what you like about the uniform * explain what you don't you like about the uniform * suggest how the uniform can be improved

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Dear Sumeet,

I am writing this letter to draw your immediate attention towards the pros and cons of our new working dress ciode. Since I received the new uniform for our company, I am feeling more comfortable in my work and it also shows the sign of equality.

Nevertheless, My colleagues and I are more disappointed due to the tiny size, few number of pockets as well as fabric quality. Moreover, Similar to our old dress code, it is challenging to carry a number of tools with us and fabric does not seem durable. Having more pockets in the uniform aloows us to conveniently carry various items, while high quality fabric ensures proper breathability.

Hence, I would suggest you to please arrange a meeting with coworkers to collect views about the material, dimensions and number of pockets about the profressional attair. I wish you will take the neccessary steps to resolve this dilemma.

I am looking forward to your prompt reply.

yours faithfully,

Ranjit kaur

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

number: 3

pockets: 3

fabric: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. Minor improvements in organization and clarity would enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly clear, but some organizational issues and grammatical errors affect the overall flow and cohesion. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would significantly improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's sophistication and impact. Some lexical errors are present.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the letter attempts to use a range of grammatical structures, numerous errors affect accuracy and fluency. Improved grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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