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Band 5+: Your company is hosting a charity event to raise money for a local animal shelter, and you want to invite your neighbors. Write a letter to your neighbors inviting them to the event. You should include details about: - the purpose of the charity event and the animal shelter it benefits - when and where the event will take place and what activities will be included - how they can contribute or participate if they are interested.

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DEAR MRS TOLULOPE,

I AM WRITING TO INFORM AND ALSO WELCOME YOUR PRESENCE AT THE CHARITY PROGRAMME THAT IS COMING UP IN TWO MONTHS TIME. AS A YEARLY FUNDRAISING EVENT, THIS YEAR EVENT WILL FOCUS ON HOUSING, INCOME RAISING, HEALTH FACILITIES FOR THE SHERPERD.

THE REASON FOR ORGANIZING THIS PROGRAMME YEARLY IS TO REPORT THE PROGRESS OF THE COMMUNITY SHEPHERD, LOOK INTO THEIR NEED AND EVALUATE THE WORK DONE IN THE PREVIOUS YEAR.

THEREFORE , IT IS A NORM THAT I INVITES AT LEAST TWO PERSONS IN THE COMMUNITY TO GRACE THE OCCASION WHICH WILL TAKE PLACE AT THE COMMUNITY STADIUM ON SATURDAY , 9AM PROMPT. THIS PROGRAMME IS A LOVELY ONE THAT MEMBERS OF THE COMMUNITY COME OUT IN MASS TO ATTEND. ENTERTAINMENT ARE ALSO IN PLACE AS DIFFERENT DISHES ARE SERVED, DANCING, SINGING. EVERYONE WILL BE ON GREEN AS THIS IS THE COLOUR OF THE DAY.

YOUR CONTRIBUTION TOWARDS THIS EVENT WILL GO A LONG WAY TO HELP IN ACHIEVING OUR TARGET FOR THIS EVENT.

I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO HEAR FROM YOU SOON.

YOURS SINCERELY,

TAIWO.

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Overall Band Score

5
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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
community: 4
programme: 3
event: 3
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Task Response

5
The letter attempts to address the task but includes irrelevant and inaccurate information, detracting from the overall achievement. The purpose of the fundraising gala is not clearly stated as being for an animal shelter, and the details provided are vague and somewhat confusing. To improve, focus on directly addressing the prompt's requirements with clear and specific information. Ensure the purpose, details, and impact of their attendance are explicitly stated.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of information could be improved. The purpose of the event shifts between supporting a community shepherd and a more general fundraising event, which may confuse the reader. To enhance coherence, focus on a single, clear purpose (supporting the animal shelter as mentioned in the task) and ensure all details relate back to this main goal. Use transitional phrases to connect ideas and create a smoother narrative.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary used is basic and lacks the sophistication needed to fully convey the importance and appeal of the charity gala. To improve, incorporate more descriptive and engaging language. For example, instead of 'lovely one,' use 'a memorable and impactful event.' Instead of 'different dishes are served,' try 'a delightful array of culinary offerings.' Expanding your vocabulary will make the invitation more persuasive and appealing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5
The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with subject-verb agreement ('this year event will focus'), incorrect word usage ('income raising'), and sentence structure. To improve grammatical accuracy, carefully proofread your writing, paying attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and correct word choice. Consider using a grammar checker to identify and correct errors. Practice constructing a variety of sentence types to enhance your grammatical range.

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