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Band 5+: Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with

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Dear Heta,

How are you? It’s been a while hasn’t it ?The last time we meet met at sushant wedding.

Anyway, I am writing this letter in reagards to our plan to go to watch film on next sunday.unfortunately, I cannot join you because i have my practical exam on monday and for that i have to attend

extra tuition classess on Sunday morning

Furthermore, on sunday evening I will also go for my first french learning class. so due to this reasons, i will not be a part of your plan.

However, as you have already booked the tickets my sister Sweta will come instead of me. As you guys are very familiar to each other and she will be also comfortable with you as she also attended Sushant’s wedding with us. So, I am sure you guys will not only enjoy but also can match good vibes with each other.

I hope you, understand my situation, and I will try my best to catch Up mex time. I can’t wait to hear from you.

Lots of love,

Dhara.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The task is fully addressed. The letter clearly explains the reason for cancellation, suggests a replacement, and justifies the choice. However, minor improvements in clarity and conciseness could elevate the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly clear, but the flow could be smoother. Some sentences are awkwardly phrased, affecting the overall coherence. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is adequate and mostly accurate. While there's a range of words, more precise and sophisticated language could be employed to enhance the overall impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect the clarity and fluency. Significant improvement in grammar and punctuation is needed to achieve a higher score.

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