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Band 5+: Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with

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Dear Jamal,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter because I am unable to come with you for the movie and I apologize.

Actually, my grandfather’s health is not good since the last 2 days, so he was admitted to the hospital and I will stay with him for a week because I can take care of him. Due to this emergency, I am unable to come with you.

Moreover, I found another person who can come with you. His name is Noman, who is my cousin. He is like my brother.

Let me tell you about some qualities of Noman; he is a funny person, you cannot feel bored. Also, he is a Shahrukh Khan fan; he watches Shahrukh Khan movies in the theatre. However, his friend is working in the theatre; he will provide you with free popcorn and drinks.

I hope you will enjoy the movie with him and again, sorry for not being able to join with you.

See you soon.

Best regards,

Munhoz

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The task is fully addressed, but some parts could be more detailed and engaging.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is easy to follow, but the flow could be improved with better transitions and paragraphing. The grammar errors affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would enhance the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar errors are frequent and noticeable, impacting the overall clarity and fluency. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed.

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