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Band 5+: Your local park has become dirty and unsafe. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: describe the problems explain how these problems affect the community suggest some solutions

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Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to inform local council that the park is unsafe and dirty

I would like to address problems associated with the park which impacts surrounding. There is no proper maintenance team for the park, which has now led to unhygienic restrooms, trash cans with flies buzzing around. Absence of CCTV surveillance makes it even more unsafe to allow children and the elderly people do feel the same.

To ensure safety and hygiene of citizens I request local council to take immediate action which makes situation better.

Complete CCTV surveillance 24/7, restrooms with proper maintenance and regular maintenance team will lead to a better situation .

Hope this letter address the issues with the park and i would be glad to know the changes to be made

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The letter adequately addresses the task by explaining the problems, their importance, and suggesting solutions. However, elaborating further on the impact of these issues and providing more specific suggestions could enhance the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

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The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider dedicating separate paragraphs to each point mentioned in the task instructions (problems, importance, and solutions). Using clearer topic sentences at the beginning of each paragraph would also enhance coherence.

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The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement. Try to use more varied and precise language to describe the problems and solutions. For example, instead of just saying 'dirty,' you could use words like 'littered' or 'unsanitary.' Instead of 'makes situation better', try 'ameliorates the situation'.

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The letter contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, article usage (a/an/the), and sentence structure. For example, 'the park is unsafe and dirty' could be improved. Also, review the use of prepositions and conjunctions to ensure accurate and effective communication.

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