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Band 5+: Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing to inform you that I have received your letter about the noise level from the flat number 34 at Moon apartment.

Before I ask for apologise, allow me to explain the situation. As you are aware that my family and myself are not living there, and we have allocated that space to college students for the past 2 years. After having a chat with my fellow members, I got the news that their exam got over last month, since then they were having frequent parties at this place.

While I understand sometimes students do misbhevae with their friends, I heartly wanted to express my sorry on behalf of them. Also I have asked them to submit me full report along with sorry letter so that I can take necessary actions for the future.

In addition, I assure you that from now onwards there will be no noise because I have given a final warning to my tenants. Even if they make noise, I will be left with no option, but they have to empty the house.

Once again, I apologize for the inconvenience caused. Please do not hesitate to reach out to me if you have any questions.

Yours faithfully,

Harsh Katariya

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

noise: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task by explaining the reasons for the noise, apologizing, and describing the action to be taken. However, there are some minor deviations from the task requirements, such as not directly acknowledging the disturbance caused to the neighbors. It would be beneficial to focus more on the impact of the noise on the neighbors to fully address the task.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with paragraphing and organization. The flow of ideas could be improved by separating the explanation of the noise from the apology and action plan more clearly. Additionally, some sentences are unclear or awkwardly phrased, affecting the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are misused or inappropriate for the context. The letter lacks sophistication in language use and could benefit from more precise and varied vocabulary. Additionally, there are spelling errors ('misbhevae' should be 'misbehave') that impact the lexical resource score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

While there is an attempt to use a variety of sentence structures, there are several grammatical errors throughout the letter. Issues with verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and word choice affect the overall accuracy. Proofreading for grammar and sentence structure would improve the score in this criterion.

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