🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!
Opinion

Band 6+: In many families nowadays, both parents work and pay people to look after their children. Some people believe this is not good for families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Note: Both the topic and the essay were created by one of our users.

It is the fundamental right of children to be taken care of by their parents. However, in many families in recent years, this unique responsibility has been assigned to paid nannies, while the mothers and fathers work. I share the same opinion with those that are against this new trend because, it not only brings about poor nutritional care of the children, but it also exposes the whole family to danger.

First of all, I believe that, children from such families regularly lack basic nutritional care. Although, the parents can afford to prepare the best types of meals for them, but since they are too busy with work, the responsibility will be handed over to the nannies who, most times, do not have knowledge of balance diet. This is what is obtainable in most African homes. For example, doctors in Nigeria have confirmed through research that, children of working class parents suffer from malnutrition more than those ones that have at least one of their parents to care for them. Moreover, if they become sick, their mothers and fathers will spend money and time on their medical care.

Another reason why I am against this new development is that, the safety of the children and the house properties may not be guaranteed when the parents away. If they domestic staff have questionable characters, they connive with criminals to kidnap these minors or steal family belongs, such as money, jewelries, and clothes. Records of police investigations in Nigeria proves that, the domestic staff are involved in more than 80 percent of crimes that happens in various homes in Nigeria. Further more, these minors might be molested sexually. This may lead to sexually transmitted diseases.

In conclusion, I am of the opinion that, paying individuals to take care of the children while parents work should be discouraged because, the childrenmight be poorly fed and the safety of these young ones and the family belongs may be threatened.

Word Count: 325

Essays On The Same Topic:

In many families nowadays, both parents work and pay people to look after their children. Some people believe this is not good for families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In several household, both mother and father are employed and they hire babysitter for their babies’ care. This is considered bad by many people. I partially agree with this statement. There are several reasons why leaving a child under someone else’s care is harmful for families, however multiple factors also suggest that both parents have […]

In many families nowadays, both parents work and pay people to look after their children. Some people believe this is not good for families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this period of nowadays, parents work and pay person to guard after their kids which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many individuals claiming that benefits while others reject this nation. This substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy impact in recent years. In my opinion, I strongly agree […]

In many families nowadays, both parents work and pay people to look after their children. Some people believe this is not good for families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern life, many families are hiring babysitters to take care of their children due to being busy with work. Still, some people argue about this idea because it has a negative impact on families. This essay strongly agrees with the argument because recruiting people outside would cost lots of money and babysitters may harm […]

See All

Other Topics:

Many people argue that technological progress has made human life more stressful rather than easier. Do you agree or disagree?

When it comes to the issue of modern technology, a significant number of inhabitants stand with different kinds of views. While a good number of individuals tend to take this development as beneficial, others seem to hold the opposite view. However, I strongly disagree with the statement because technology saves time and improves communication. On […]

These days, people work in more than one job, and often change career several times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays, people tend to work two or more jobs and are willing to change jobs frequently. This change offers many benefits for personal development and helps individuals find their passion; however, financial instability and limited career advancement are major disadvantages for those who want to pursue a diversified career. Proactively changing jobs helps individuals improve […]

Some people say we do not need printed newspapers anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is often debated whether printed newspapers are still relevant in today’s world, with some arguing that printed newspaper is not important nowadays. While I acknowledge that the relevance of the printed newspaper still exists in developing countries so, I partially agree with the view, as this essay will discuss. On the one hand, there […]

Some people are happy to stay in the same area in their whole life. While others prefer living in many different places. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some individuals choose to live in the same residential area for their whole lives. I think the main reason behind this is their familiarity with the neighborhood and it can create a negative impact in the long run on peoples’ lives. Initialy, people stay in the same location for their entire lives have born there, […]

Public celebration (such as national days, festivals and so on) are held in most countries. These are often quite expensive, and some people say that governments should spend money on more useful things. Do you agree or disagree?

Public celebrations such as national holidays, cultural festivals, and public events are common in many countries. While some people argue that governments should allocate the money spent on these occasions to more essential sectors, I disagree with this view. I believe that public celebrations provide significant social, cultural, and economic benefits that justify their cost. […]

Technology is being used more and more in education.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

Today, using technology is one of the most relevant methods to teach learners. It involves many beneficial aspects such as, learning on a distance and playing as a form of teaching. In contrast, there are problems with internet connection or possibilities for cheating that make this inefficient. Online learning has become a common way to […]

See All
We have detected unusual activity on your device.
Please verify your identity to continue.
Note: This verification step won't sign you in. If you have a premium account, please log in to access the service as usual.
Google/Gmail Verification
Or verify using Email/Code
We've sent a verification code to:
youremail@gmail.com (Not your email?)
Enter it below to complete the verification process.
Ensure your email address is correct, your inbox is not full, and you check your spam folder. If no email arrives, consider using an alternative email.
You will need a Premium plan to perform your action!
Note: If you already have a premium account, please log in to access our services as usual.

Plans & Pricing

Our mission is to make quality education accessible for everyone.
However, to keep our hardworking team running and this service alive, we genuinely need your support!
By opting for a premium plan, not only do you sustain us in achieving the mission, but you also unlock advanced features to enrich your learning experience.

Free

For learners who aren't pressed for time

What's included on Free
100+ Cambridge IELTS Tests
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator (2 times/month)
500+ Dictation & Shadowing Exercises
100+ Pronunciation Exercises
Flashcards
Other Advanced Tools

Premium

For those serious about advancing their English proficiency, and for IELTS candidates aspiring to boost their band score by 1-2 points (especially in writing & speaking) in just 30 days or less

What's included on Premium
Save Your IELTS Test Progress & Analyze Mistakes By Question Type
Save Your Own Flashcard Sets & Use Them On Any Device
Unlock All Courses, IELTS Tests, Section & Part Practice
Unlimited AI Conversations
Unlimited AI Writing Enhancement Exercises
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation
Checked Answers Will Not Be Published
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Sample Generator
Unlimited Usage Of Advanced Tools & AI Features
Priority Support within 24h (12-month plan only)

Due to the nature of our service and the provided free trials, payments are non-refundable.