🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!
Opinion

Band 7+: "Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Note: Both the topic and the essay were created by one of our users.

In the modern world, many people consider the treatment of diseases to be too expensive, saying that prevention is better than cure. Furthermore, they believe that it is more appropriate to allocate funds to preventative measures. I completely agree with this statement. However, medical treatment still remains necessary.

On the one hand, preventative measures have evident benefits. For instance, they are more cost-effective compared to treatment. It is cheaper to receive a vaccination than to deal with diseases after contracting them. This is especially beneficial for the older generation, who might not have much money for treatment. In addition, prevention improves public health and reduces disease risk. In other words, the more people are vaccinated, the higher the chances of reducing the risk. This helps improve the health of society as a whole, as fewer people are likely to contract a particular illness.

On the other hand, treatment is still essential for the already existing diseases. Not all illnesses can be prevented or totally stopped with a vaccine. Hence, it is crucial to not only develop the vaccinations, but also to pay attention to the medical treatments. Although many vaccinations exist, some people still have not receive them due to their personal fears and preferences. As a result, it is important to improve treatments to make all people feel confident that they can be healed regardless of the circumstances.

All things considered, prevention measures are far more beneficial than the treatment by their lower costs and higher chances. However, dealing with diseases is important indeed, as this almost fully guarantees a healing.

Word Count: 262

Essays On The Same Topic:

“Prevention is better than cure.” Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

MODERN HEALTH IMPROVE DAY BY DAY AND DOCTORS CAN FIND MANY NEW CURE WAY. IF HEALTH BUDGET CAN DIVERTED A LARGE PROORTION DIVERTED FOR HEALTH EDUCATIO AND PREENTATIVE MEASURE, MANY ILNESSES CURE WILL BE FIND ALSO. I AGRRE THAT IDEA. GOVERNMENT MUST DIVIDE HEALTH BUDGET CORRECTLY, THEY WIIL IMPROVE THEIR HEALTH SYSTEM BETTER . SUPPORTING […]

“Prevention is better than cure.” Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is commonly believed that prevention is better than treatment as studying and treating illness is highly expensive, and authorities shold investing in preventative programs. This essay totally agrees that prevention diseases than cure them becuase treating may cost indivisauls high money and they can’t afford to pay. Also, prevention programs may lead people to […]

“Prevention is better than cure.” Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, people are concerned about their health and they will go to any extend to live healthy. It is argued that, diagnosing and curing health issues are much expensive and it is better to spend money on healthy living and supporting essentials. I completely agree with the view because plenty of the preventive measures are […]

“Prevention is better than cure.” Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I strongly agreed with the concept that we should give more effort in solving than cure. Prevention are part-time solution but cure is permanent. In every country we always use high budget in our medical sector .But we bound ourself in a loop hole and we can not pull ourself from it. If we become […]

See All

Other Topics:

Some people believe that children's time outside of school should be filled with scheduled activities such as art and music classes and sports. Others feel that children need free time to play and relax. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, more and more parents are of the view that children’s time off from school should be planned and consist of different activities. Nevertheless, there are still some people that think differently. They allow children to spend their free time the way they want, for example recovering or playing. On the one hand, having scheduled […]

Some people believe that LPDP scholarship alumni should no longer be required to return to Indonesia to contribute after completing their studies abroad. Do you agree or disagree?

In this condition, I agree with that statement. Observing the economic conditions of Indonesia, many people need job fields for surviving and improving their fate yet the more people look for job fields the harder to find job fields. As a result, many people are jobless and some of well educated people feel disappointed at […]

The internet has created knowledge quickly available to people through computers and smartphones in the world. A lot of this knowledge is free. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh disadvantages.

Nowadays, individuals easily obtain lots of information on the internet using several devices without charges and it has become increasingly common. While this trend has certain drawbacks, the public believe that this thing could make a positive development in the long term. Several major merits of these benefits are citizens would be able to collect […]

Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals, and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agre or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, few citizens believe that the resources and time allocated to wildlife conservation could be reduced and redirected to benefit the human population. This essay argues that investing in animal preservation is crucial, as it sustains the food chain and protects natural creatures. The primary reason for this is the importance of maintaining the food […]

IELTS Writing Task 2/ IELTS Essay: Write about the following topic: In some places, money earned from tourism has become an important part of the economy. What are the advantages and disadvantages of relying on tourism as a major source of revenue? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, many countries promote international tourism as a major source of revenue. There are both benefits and drawbacks to relying on the tourism industry. This essay will present my opinion on the advantages and disadvantages. There are many advantages in tourism as a major source of income for a country. The primary reason is that […]

Access to clean water is a basic human right. Therefore every home should have a water supply that is provided free of charge. Do you agree or disagree?

The question of whether access to clean water should be provided free of charge has emerged as a significant ethical and socio-economic debate, involving a complex interplay of public welfare and resource management. While proponents argue that universal free provision ensures equality and basic human dignity, I contend that a regulated, paid system – supported […]

See All
We have detected unusual activity on your device.
Please verify your identity to continue.
Note: This verification step won't sign you in. If you have a premium account, please log in to access the service as usual.
Google/Gmail Verification
Or verify using Email/Code
We've sent a verification code to:
youremail@gmail.com (Not your email?)
Enter it below to complete the verification process.
Ensure your email address is correct, your inbox is not full, and you check your spam folder. If no email arrives, consider using an alternative email.
You will need a Premium plan to perform your action!
Note: If you already have a premium account, please log in to access our services as usual.

Plans & Pricing

Our mission is to make quality education accessible for everyone.
However, to keep our hardworking team running and this service alive, we genuinely need your support!
By opting for a premium plan, not only do you sustain us in achieving the mission, but you also unlock advanced features to enrich your learning experience.

Free

For learners who aren't pressed for time

What's included on Free
100+ Cambridge IELTS Tests
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation (5 times/month)
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator (2 times/month)
500+ Dictation & Shadowing Exercises
100+ Pronunciation Exercises
Flashcards
Other Advanced Tools

Premium

For those serious about advancing their English proficiency, and for IELTS candidates aspiring to boost their band score by 1-2 points (especially in writing & speaking) in just 30 days or less

What's included on Premium
Save Your IELTS Test Progress
Unlock All Courses & IELTS Tests
Unlimited AI Conversations
Unlimited AI Writing Enhancement Exercises
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation
Checked Answers Will Not Be Published
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Sample Generator
Unlimited Usage Of Advanced Tools
Priority Support within 24h (12-month plan only)

Due to the nature of our service and the provided free trials, payments are non-refundable.
Nếu bạn là người Việt Nam và không có hoặc không muốn trả bằng credit/debit cards, bạn có thể thanh toán bằng phương thức chuyển khoản:



Chọn gói:
419,000₫ 277,000 ₫ cho gói 1 tháng (chỉ 9,233₫/ngày)
1,239,000₫ 597,000 ₫ cho gói 3 tháng (chỉ 6,633₫/ngày)
2,469,000₫ 1,027,000 ₫ cho gói 6 tháng (chỉ 5,706₫/ngày)
4,929,000₫ 1,417,000 ₫ cho gói 12 tháng (chỉ 3,936₫/ngày)


Sau khi chuyển khoản, vui lòng đợi trình duyệt tự động điều hướng bạn trở lại Engnovate và bạn sẽ ngay lập tức nhận được mã kích hoạt tài khoản premium.
Nếu có lỗi xảy ra, bạn có thể liên hệ với team thông qua một trong các phương thức: email đến helloengnovate@gmail.com hoặc nhắn tin qua facebook.com/engnovate.
Vì toàn bộ công cụ trên website đều có thể sử dụng thử miễn phí, Engnovate không hỗ trợ hoàn tiền.