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Band 7+: Question 1: Recent figures show an increase in violent rate. Some psychologists claim that the basic reasons for this is that the government is not doing much enough to prevent its citizens from being violated.

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Nowadays, there is an alarming tendency emerging among inhabitants, especially adolescents—the increasing crime and violent rate. To illustrate, homicides, harassment, hate crimes, and gun crime are on the rise in Canada; in 2021, police reported 788 homicides, 29 more than in 2020, a 3% increase nationally. This disturbing phenomenon led to many dramatic arguments in society and promoted some experts to assert that governmental inaction or insufficient efforts to protect citizens contributes significantly to increased violence. I totally agree that governments attention and action play a crucial role in curbing violence, other factors, such as socioeconomic conditions, cultural influences, educational system also significantly contribute to the issue.

To commence, the responsibility of governments in mitigating violence cannot be underestimated. Governments hold the power to implement policies that foster public safety, such as stringent laws on firearms, increased police presence in high-crime areas, and supportive resources for victims of violent crimes. For instance, countries with robust gun control measures, like Japan, demonstrate significantly lower rates of gun-related violence compared to nations with lax regulations. Moreover, proactive measures, such as community outreach programs and promoting education and awareness are essential tools that can aid in preventing potential offenders from resorting to violence. Local governments or non-government organsiations can organize seminars focusing on domestic violence, bullying, and other common issues, providing practical tools for prevention.

Beyond governmental responsibility, socioeconomic conditions play an equally critical role in influencing rates of violence. Raising funds to support the poor and unemployment is also a way to reduce the rate of violent crime in society because their lives are full and there are no threats. For many, poverty and limited access to education create environments conducive to crime. Research has repeatedly shown that economically disadvantaged communities often experience heightened levels of violence, as individuals may resort to criminal activities as a means of survival. Additionally, the educational system should be carefully considered as teenagers nowadays have chance to assess the Internet earlier, so this can lead to a lot of cyberbullying and cyberstalking in social media under huge forms. We should normalize violence between students because this is the primary reason causing to the statue today.

In conclusion, while government action is essential in preventing violence, it is not the sole factor. A comprehensive strategy that addresses both institutional weaknesses and societal challenges is required to tackle the increasing violent crime rate effectively. Only through collective effort can sustainable progress be made in ensuring public safety.

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