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Band 5+: Some people believe that mistakes are essential for success, while others think they should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Although some people assume committing errors can lead to setbacks, others think mistakes have the undeniable rolls for achieve success in most people’ lives. In my opinion, errors should be happened by people who want to achieve valuable things in their lives.

On the one hand, people should avoid the type of mistakes that the consequences are obvious. Consuming alcohol or Smoking cigarette have clear results for someone’s body which starting use of them. For people who assume they are just some mistakes, awful results might happen in the near future. Moreover, there are some omissions for people considering them as some mistakes. For instance, most students release study at school or university for just have more fun with their friends. These type of mistakes might affect all their lives because they would not find a suitable occupation due to without literacy or graduation. As a results, there is no precious lesson in these kind of mistakes.

On the other hand, without mistakes there are no progress in life because errors are important part of learning process. For instance, Tomas Edison who invited lamp with more and more errors. He acclaimed that “there are no mistakes remain that I do that and ultimately I find the right way. Furthermore, if people read most famous people’ biographies, they would figure out how many mistakes they made until they being successful in their lives. In my opinion, mistakes would be the best friends if understand the valuable lesson on them to improve yourself and make the better version of life.

In conclusion, whist most people should avoid do some type of mistakes that the results are obvious such as smoking and drinking alcohol, other sort of mistakes generally are necessary for development and improvement of life. If people comprehend the valuable lesson on them and avoiding do that again, the result would be brilliant in the future.

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