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Band 5+: Some people believe that schools should only teach children's subjects which are beneficial to their future career and therefore other subjects such as music and sports are not important.

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Some individuals think that schools should teach their children’s only those subjects that have benefits to their future career and they believe that other subjects not really important and there is no need for them. Actually both sides have their own advantages , but I am strongly disagree with that statement. And in that essay I am going to present some reasons of why I think that all subjects in schools are important.

First of all I think that the subjects that we have at school were not chosen by the ministry of education without reasons. In my opinion subjects like music, sport or painting improve the creativity, fantasy and also important for physical and mental health. On the one hand it is really important to know a lot about scientific subjects but on the other hand to have a good critical thinking, spiking skills or a sport achievements are also equally important. For example if once has strong knowledges in science but completely lacks creativity or physical abilities, it can negatively affect their health and overall development. A balance between intellectual, creativity and physical skills is essential for a long-term well-being.

And the second reason why I believe that all subjects are crucial at schools is that we do not know who the child want to be in the future. The statement is say about subjects that are important for child’s future , but what if some child want to be a artist or actor. In that case the lessons of creativity and music lessons are really important. But in any case subjects like music, sport or something like that not led for students get bored and feel exhausted. For example if I think back to my school years and imagine that there had been no physical education classes or painting and speaking skills lessons, I believe that I would not have any desire to go to school.

To sum up, I believe that all subjects are crucial, because they are important for child’s mental and physical heals and also for their all-rounded development.

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