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Band 4+: Some people say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lessons about work and become more disciplined. Others argue that teenagers shouldn't sacrifice their rest and after-school activities to work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The part of society consider that young people should gain their budget by yourself to develop disciplined, but others believe that they should not spend their time for it. From the overall point of view, I agree with second opinion, but it is not absolutely correct because everyone has different condition to start career in young age.

Firstly, I want to discuss about first opinion, so the main argument, which confirms it, is learning financial literacy, when people earn money by yourself, they do not want to spend it for not essential goods. As well as, it contribute their skills and experience, so they can get job easily, but of course, if they get high degree. It is good opportunity to help your family, if their financial situation is not stability.

On the other hand, everyone will work in the future, so rest time from study is spent better for other activities which you like, based on it, second opinion is better. First opinion also can take some troubles, because people might think, that if they gain money, they should not get education, but perspective of promotion cannot be without diploma. Proof for it is statistic of British government, which tells, that more that each fives person, who work earn money in young age, does not get more education than school.

In conclusion, if you have opportunity to not work, spending time for other activities is better. As well as, if you work when you is young, do not forget about education, it is not only your ticket to easily promotion, but also your knowledge.

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