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Band 9: Some people think the modern world we are more dependent in each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss the both view and give your own opinion.

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In contemporary society, individuals hold diverse perspectives regarding their dependency on one another. While a significant number of people argue that reliance on others has increased, my personal viewpoint suggests that modern life has fostered greater independence and self-sufficiency among individuals.

It is indeed accurate that we exhibit increased interdependence in today’s world. Firstly, the complexities of life have intensified, notably exacerbated by the soaring cost of living. For instance, young adults frequently seek financial assistance from their parents when purchasing a home due to unprecedented property prices. Without such support, affording a deposit or a mortgage would be unattainable for many individuals. Additionally, modern aspirations have evolved, with parents striving for improved living standards for their families. Consequently, when both parents are required to engage in full-time employment, they often depend on external assistance from grandparents or professional childcare providers.

Conversely, I align with the perspective that emphasizes increased independence in today’s society. To begin with, familial structures have transformed significantly; families are becoming smaller and more geographically dispersed, which results in diminished reliance on extended family members. Moreover, individuals now enjoy unprecedented freedom to relocate and establish lives far removed from their hometowns. For example, many young adults are learning to live autonomously, cultivating life skills that enhance their self-sufficiency. Additionally, the trend of pursuing education abroad has become increasingly popular, as students opt for international university experiences rather than local institutions. This journey towards independence is also fueled by advancements in technology, which facilitate remote work capabilities. As a result, numerous individuals find themselves empowered to operate independently from traditional office environments, often eschewing collaborative workspaces in favor of digital resources and online forums that provide sufficient guidance for resolving job-related challenges.

In conclusion, although there are compelling arguments supporting the notion that individuals are becoming more reliant on one another, I contend that the current societal framework promotes a stronger sense of independence than ever before.

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