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Band 6+: Write about the following topic: There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

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Yes, there is indeed a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically and ultimately some people have started to believe the likes of physical education and cookery which are non-academic subjects, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To some extent, I might agree with the statement but can not fully which I’m going to show in three reasons and with a few examples.

Let’s have a proper view of the academic subjects and non-academic subjects at the initial; academic subjects are the ones that are known for their structured curriculum-based learning with given subject materials and assessed through some exams, assignments, and other assessing parameters. On the other hand, non-academic subjects are the ones that provide us with practical lessons, and real-life scenario-based learning, and might be assessed with some hands-on examination or with some practical real-life assignments.

So for the first point, it’s clear that for the sake of survival, academic subjects might provide you with insights on how to live and lead a good life but to implicate them and apply them in real life, everyone needs a proper understanding of the non-academic subjects. When you are lost in a jungle, Mathes will not save you in most steps, the teachings of physical education where survival is a primary training will be the one as your savior.

What is the target of academic persuasion through schools or any other educational institutes? Yes, young people are trying to get some sort of educational landmarks or institutional certifications so that they can reach their goals and prosper in life with some decent work to do that they specialize in throughout their academic journey. But academic persuasion is not all about that, it’s to help you in your survival on this harsh planet. For the sake of survival, you need to know about non-academic subjects like physical education, and cookery. These two are some of the most essential parts of our daily lives. Let’s have some time on having the thought of you know how to do your job but do not know how to reach your job destination safely which is taught by physical education and do not know what to eat when you are enervated at the end of the day by doing loads of work of your expertise.

Nelson Mandela said, “Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world”. Succeding in academic life with subjects like Science, Mathematics, Medical, Physics, and Engineering along with many other academic subjects in the schools alone wouldn’t help you change the world. In succeeding in those scholarly paths and in real the young people need the help of the necessities of life that are taught by non-academic subjects like physical education, and cookery.

To have a real-life visualization on the topic while evaluating the current world, it could be seen that more than half percent of the millionaires present in the current world stated that academic life helped them in finding the idea but the non-academic subjects learning was the one that helped them secure their life ahead to the peak of success. Chef Gordon is one of the most renowned personalities in the world, but he is not known for being a specialist in medicine, a physics noble prize winner, or a researcher or chemist- he is known to the world because of his cookery. The athletes in the current modern-day world are the ones who are earning most. The example of Lebron James, Kobe Briant, Tiger Woods, Cristiano Ronaldo, Lionel Messi, and many others are very common who are earning the most in the world and are popular among people because of their special feats in a physical showcase in sports which is a branch of physical education.

Another interesting fact is that young people are more attracted and interested in the non-academic subjects of the schools than in the academic subjects. Specially the students in the early grades, sometimes become bored in academic subject classes while it’s found that they are overly enthusiastic in non-academic subjects!

There is a balance to this world, the scholarly educational subjects like Maths, Sciences, Chemistry, Physics, Architecture, Engineering, Geology, Biomedical, Medicine, and many others are very important and might be the core foundation of civilization. But for the sake of implementing them, survival, and earning a higher margin in the modern days, it is the non-academic subjects that are attracting young people.

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