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Band 5+: Writing task 1 You stayed in a hotel and was not satisfied with service. Write a letter to manager. - why you chose this hotel - what problems did you face - tell the manager what to do

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you this letter in order to say about was not satisfaction with the hotel’s service.

Firstly,I visited two days ago to your hotel according to my friend’s recommendation.They said me. They were in this hotel twice in a year and this period.They enjoyed from hotel’s atmosphera and the attitude of the staff’s.So I waited a high quality service from your hotel.

Secondly,I did not expect any problems my face. At the beginning fist day,problems aroze.I entered to have a shower but the hitting system stopped. When I have a shower. It was very unpleasent in the middle of winter.When I notified to employer.He answered me a rude way.

On the one hand,as I waited repairing hitting system all day and the electric worked with the noise.I had a headacake.I request you to take action against the employee.

I hope you undestand me.

Yours sincerely,Fozilova Feruzakxon.

Word Count: 153

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, but the description of the problems and the requested actions could be more detailed and clearer.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's structure is understandable, but the numerous grammatical errors and unclear phrasing affect the overall flow and coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is adequate, but the range is limited, and some word choices are inaccurate or inappropriate, affecting the overall clarity and precision.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly impact the clarity and understanding of the message. More accurate and varied grammatical structures are needed.

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