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Band 5+: Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem

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Dear Garuda Airport,

I am writing this letter to inform you that i have problem when I returned from my business trip form Jakarta to Makassar. It was the number 123 plane at evening 16:00 PM 20th October When i was out from the airport ,and i am not realize i forgot my bag on my plane.

I would like to describe about my bag. It is small black bag and this merk is Vans. This thing is important to me because it is give from my girlfriend when we celebrate my birthday. Moreover, There is important document in my bag, as well as my laptop it is more expensive, and 200 dollars cash.

Therefore, I hope you can find my important stuff and I hope you contact to me if you obtain my item as soon as possible. If you send it to me by courier service i will appreciate that. I am happy and i can pay more.

Best Regards Ahmad Ari

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Task Response

The letter addresses the task, explaining the situation, describing the bag and its contents, and stating what the writer would like the airline to do. However, there are some minor issues with clarity and coherence, and some sentences could be rephrased for better flow.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally easy to follow, but there are some minor issues with cohesion, such as the sudden shift from describing the bag to mentioning the contents. Additionally, some sentences could be linked more clearly to improve the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

The writer uses some basic vocabulary accurately, but there is limited range and precision. There are some errors in word choice (e.g., 'merk' instead of 'brand') and some phrases could be rephrased for more natural expression.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The writer uses simple sentence structures accurately, but there are some errors in grammar and punctuation (e.g., missing articles, incorrect verb tenses). There is also limited range in sentence structure and complexity.

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