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Band 4+: You were recently disrespected by one of the employees at your local supermarket. Write a letter to the supermarket manager. In your letter - tell him/her why you were speaking with the employee - describe the employee's rude behavior - explain what you'd like the manager to do

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Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing this letter with the purpose of in your supermarket one employee disrespected me .

The first thing should be mentioned is that 2 days before I visited in your supermarket bring some fruits. However,I ask one employee help me becous I do not understand fruits cost and this worker tolking with me very irreverence Furthermore,I am dismally this worker.

Another pointto keep in mind is that I lot of people do not like this employee Moreover, like this worker I dislike I request you suchlike workers you should fire As a result, your supermarket being the best in local area .

I hope the problem will be solued as quickly as possible and look forword to recliving your response letter soon

Your faithfuly

Anna Tramp

Word Count: 132

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

supermarket: 3

employee: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses all parts of the task, but the description of events and the request are not clearly expressed. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's structure and flow are somewhat disjointed, impacting the overall clarity and readability. Numerous grammatical errors further hinder coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks precision and sophistication in places. Word choice could be improved for greater clarity and impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly affect the overall quality and understanding. Improved grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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