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Band 5+: The diagram below shows information on Canada's 12 largest aboriginal communities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays Canada’s 12 largest urban aboriginal and metropolitan areas, 1996 census, measured in thousands: Victoria holds 5k, Vancouver shows 36k, Calgary indicates 10k, Edmonton records 30k, Saskatoon presents 9k, Regina logs 6k, Prince Albert exhibits 8k, Winnipeg reaches 41k, Thunder Bay accounts for 7k, Toronto depicts 12k, Ottawa-Hull details 10k, and Montreal shows 10k.

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The diagram illustrates the information of canadas 12 largest Aboroginal Communities and metropolotan areas the census was conducted in th year 1996. The information above is depicted in form of a bar graph on the horizontal axis also known as the X axis is the number of citizens meausured in thousands and on the vertical axis also referred to as the Y axis is the twelve Metropolitan areas.

The population varies from state some being more than others in that some areas are densly poplulated comapared to others. Areas Victoria and Thunder bay seem to have the lowest poplulation of about eight thousand citizens which is almost equivalent to areas like Montereal and Albert, On the other hand Winnipeg has a poplulation of Forty three thousand citizens which is almost five times the number of the less densly poplulated areas.

Vancouver and edmonton are equally populated only having a diffrence of about one thousand citizens.

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Band 5+: The diagram below shows information on Canada's 12 largest aboriginal communities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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