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Band 5+: Many people think that having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time.

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Some individuals believe that being rich while having less leisure time is much more deservable than making less money and having full of free time. Personally, I partly agree with this school of thought based on the reasons that are further elucidated in this essay.

There are some reasons why it is a must to have a high income rather than free time. Compared to the past, the modern world is much more competitive and competent for our sustenance. Especially, when the economy has grown exponentially and many problems surrounding our survivals such as famine or poverty have become pervasive and prevalent, it is necessary for people to compensate their free time to earn a living. For example, Chinese employees are forced to work for more than 8 hours which can make them earn a better salary to satisfy living standards and demands in such a affluent country.

However, there are some explainations that why we should not prioritize money over free time. Some mental research propose that having a relieving mind and soul will completely make individuals easily achieve their goals. Therefore, one of the most feasible ways to do that is to having an adequate amount of free time to have more extracurricular activities and relieve stress . Plus, it is believed that our greater focus on making money, meaning working and studying allocating more time, can do harm to our biological clock, further doing harm to our physical and menta

In conclusion, while I agree that money somehow is more essential than free time in such a competitive world, we should not overly prioritize money over free time which can do harm to our mental and physical health.

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