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Band 8+: There is an annual work party next month, which is held every year. Write a letter to your colleagues to co-arrange the party. In your letter: Say what would you do differently than last year Say what you think were some of the things not so good last year Suggest where to meet to plan for the party.

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Dear team,

I hope this message finds you all well! We’re getting ready for our annual work party next month, so I wanted to talk about how we’re planning it and give you some ideas for how to make it even better this year.

When I think back on last year’s party, I think we could improve it by adding more interactive games. We could, for example, set up team games or a talent show to get more people involved and make the event more interesting. I also think that giving people a wider range of food choices would accommodate their tastes and dietary needs.

Last year, on the other hand, the venue was lovely, but the room felt a bit squished at times, which made the party less comfortable and fun overall. We would like to find a place to talk to each other and enjoy the party without being rushed or busy.

I think we should start making plans this Thursday at 3 p.m. in the meeting room. We can brainstorm together and divide up the work to ensure everything goes smoothly.

I’m excited to hear what you have to say and work with you to make this year’s party one to remember!

Best Regards,

Trang Dao

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Overall Band Score

8.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

8

The letter appropriately addresses all requirements of the task, providing relevant and sufficient information regarding improvements for the upcoming work party, addressing shortcomings of the previous event, and suggesting a meeting to plan the event. The content is well-organized and clearly presented. To further enhance the response, consider adding specific details or examples to support your suggestions, which could elevate the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

9

The letter is very well-organized and easy to follow. The ideas are presented logically, and the transitions between paragraphs are smooth, contributing to a clear and coherent message.

Lexical Resource

8

The vocabulary used is varied and appropriate for the context. The language is natural and sophisticated, enhancing the overall quality of the letter. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

9

The letter demonstrates excellent control of grammar and punctuation. The sentence structures are varied and accurate, contributing to the overall clarity and effectiveness of the communication.

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