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Band 9: You recently moved to a new city and want to join a local gym. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter: introduce yourself and say why you want to join ask about membership options and fees inquire about facilities available at the gym

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The purpose of this letter is to enquire about the gym membership for myself.

My name is Rishabh, and I have recently moved to Bengaluru. I am interested in joining your gym, as I previously trained regularly at a local fitness centre in Mumbai during my employment there. Since relocating for work, I wish to continue my fitness journey without interruption.

I would be grateful if you could provide me with details of the membership options and the fee structure. In particular, I am considering a twelve-month plan, so I would appreciate it if you could confirm whether such a package is available.

Additionally, I would like to know more about the facilities provided at your gym. Could you kindly inform me whether amenities such as a steam room or personal training sessions are included in the membership?

Thank you for your time and assistance. I look forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully,

Rishabh

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