Pie Chart

Band 5+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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Image for topic: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows three pie charts with numerical data points: San Diego: Residential 60%, Industry 23%, Agriculture 17%; California: Residential 39%, Industry 33%, Agriculture 28%; Worldwide: Residential 8%, Industry 23%, Agriculture 69%.

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The pie chart illustrates in san-diego, california and other part of the world using the water resources. Overall it is evident that, while in unspecified corner of the world the amount of water usage mostly spend on agriculture, both california and San diego cities figures show that lessly use the water on agriculture than others.

In terms of water usage in around the globe, 69 percent of water is expended on Agriculture field, the next figure shows rate 23% on industry, which followed by residential is peaked the lowest degree about 8%.

When it comes california, the highest level of water expenditure on Residential at 39%, followed by industry at 33%. following statement is agriculture accounted for 28%. In San diego water allocated as a same way california, the lion’s share of the water used on residential area. Industry made up around 23 percent. the proportion of water usage on agriculture was the lowest level at 17%

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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water: 9

agriculture: 5

california: 4

usage: 3

industry: 3

residential: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and identifies some key features, but there are areas for improvement. The organization is somewhat clear, but could benefit from a more structured approach, such as grouping information by category (e.g., agriculture, industry, residential) across the three regions. The language is generally understandable, but there are grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity. To improve, focus on using more precise language, varying sentence structure, and ensuring grammatical accuracy. Also, aim for a more cohesive and analytical approach by directly comparing and contrasting the data points.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The flow of information is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, making it difficult for the reader to follow the comparisons between the pie charts. Consider using more cohesive devices and structuring the report with a clear introduction, body paragraphs focusing on each pie chart, and a concise conclusion.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is an attempt to use some descriptive language, but it is not always accurate or effective ('mostly spend,' 'lessly use,' 'peaked the lowest degree'). Expand your vocabulary related to proportions and comparisons (e.g., 'significant proportion,' 'considerably higher,' 'noticeably lower').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impact the clarity and accuracy of the information presented. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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