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Band 5+: The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image includes a pie chart and a table; the pie chart shows transportation use in percentages with Car at 45%, LRT at 35%, Bus at 10%, and Taxi at 10%; the table lists reasons for city car use with percentages for Commute to work at 55%, Shopping at 15%, Leisure activities at 15%, Taking children to school at 40%, and Business at 45%.

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The given chart illustrates usage of transport for various reasons (commute to work, shopping, leisure activities, taking children to school, and business) and type of transports are used in city (car, light rail transit, bus, and taxi), particularly in one certain country. units are measured in percentages.

Overall, it can be seen that car usage dominates other types of transports, while public transports owned small amount of space. Of particular note is that the average people’s reason for using car in city is commute to work in question.

In pie chart, there are 45% of cars that choose to use by people. Light rail transit show 35%, take the second place. Interestingly, both bus and taxi owned 10% for many reasons.

Looking at information in more detail, the main reason for using transport is commute to work at 55%. When it comes to business, this activity show 45%, just over from taking children to school with 40%. Moreover, shopping and leisure activity illustrate 15%, respectively.

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transports: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of the diagrams and makes some relevant comparisons. However, there are some areas for improvement. The introduction could be more concise and focused. While the overview identifies the dominant car usage, it could also mention the primary reason for car use. The body paragraphs generally present the data accurately, but there's room for more specific comparisons and a more structured approach to grouping related information. For example, you could group the reasons for car use into work-related (commute and business) and personal activities (shopping, leisure, and school). Also, avoid imprecise language like "owned small amount of space".

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize the information, but the structure could be improved for better flow. The introduction is a bit awkward and could be more concise. Transitions between paragraphs are present but could be smoother to enhance the overall coherence. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs. For example, instead of simply stating facts, try to integrate them more seamlessly with connecting phrases.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. Some phrases are a bit generic (e.g., 'owned small amount of space'). Try to incorporate more specific and descriptive language to convey the information more effectively. For instance, instead of 'owned small amount of space,' you could say 'accounted for a smaller proportion of usage.' Also, be careful with word choice; for example, 'choose to use by people' is not idiomatic.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Sentence structure is sometimes awkward, and there are issues with verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. For example, 'usage of transport for various reasons' could be rephrased for better clarity. Pay close attention to these areas to improve grammatical accuracy. Proofreading carefully before submission can help identify and correct these errors.

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